Paper 3 Revision Plan
my goals for this paper revision is the same as the past, trying to resolve and make a decision on both Elisha’s and Taylor’s comments on my paper.
the biggest challenge will be connecting different sources to each other to tide the essay together. this will be difficult because not every source has good examples of form and sense drive.
some steps I will take will be looking at each claim sentence and making sure that it relates to the thesis and also looking to make sure I connect back to the thesis.
I also plan to flip around the second podcast paragraph in front of the scientific article paragraph to help the flow and connect the two
expanding upon my explanation of quotes and their connection to beauty, and continue to connect examples to the sense and form drive.
I definitely need to go through and read the paper out loud and correct any syntax or gramtical errors.
finally, I am going to try and raise the stakes in the last paragraph and answer the why should I care questions.
if I am to encounter obstacles or problems while revising I can either email Elisha or look in the little Seagal.
Sounds like a solid plan. Again, please don’t discount the idea that rereading Armstrong can actually be a time-efficient way to approach your revision.